Overall, Well.
Graphics: I can't criticize the background because that is a sprite. But Mario definitely did not look natural walking and he could had been drawn a little better. The other characters though were drawn acceptably well. Just the teleporting could use work because the circles just kinda overlap the characters and should sorta blend in more. Once they got fighting though you couldn't really see too many flaws. Also I liked the fact you made a continue part when reading the note. This way the person doesn't have to rush to read.
Overall though effort was shown and turned out fine.
Audio: Was a nice choice and in fact left me whistling it after watching it. Though at times music and talking and sound effects could be low and then all of a sudden loud forcing me to turn down the volume which I don't enjoy doing. Overall needs some improvement with keeping the volume at a decent level and some voice acting need to be a bit more clearer.
3/5-8/10
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