captainchaos03's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

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2008-11-17 20:03:38

Overall, Well.

Graphics: I can't criticize the background because that is a sprite. But Mario definitely did not look natural walking and he could had been drawn a little better. The other characters though were drawn acceptably well. Just the teleporting could use work because the circles just kinda overlap the characters and should sorta blend in more. Once they got fighting though you couldn't really see too many flaws. Also I liked the fact you made a continue part when reading the note. This way the person doesn't have to rush to read.
Overall though effort was shown and turned out fine.

Audio: Was a nice choice and in fact left me whistling it after watching it. Though at times music and talking and sound effects could be low and then all of a sudden loud forcing me to turn down the volume which I don't enjoy doing. Overall needs some improvement with keeping the volume at a decent level and some voice acting need to be a bit more clearer.

3/5-8/10

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Gustavos responds:

Hmm...all these things have been taken into account. I will be more aware of the flaws and fix the general problems with my future projects.

Thanks for revewing, but your math seems to be a bit off. 3/5 does not equal 8/10, but there's no point in caring about that now.

Halloween night intro.

2008-11-17 19:33:09

Nicely Done.

Although Halloween has past it did seem to successfully spook me just a tad. The music was definitely added to the spookiness of the video. The animation could had been a little better. The pumpkin was drawn well but Frankenstein and the other guy could be better in my opinion but since this is just an intro to your game it doesn't really matter.

4/5-8/10

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Sword Fight1

2008-02-04 18:44:05

Oh God...

Why Can't Newgrounders post flashes that actually have a point to it...horrible and if you actually make a flash this way make sure it isn't just a 10 second thing... >.>

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