Graphics: I can't criticize the background because that is a sprite. But Mario definitely did not look natural walking and he could had been drawn a little better. The other characters though were drawn acceptably well. Just the teleporting could use work because the circles just kinda overlap the characters and should sorta blend in more. Once they got fighting though you couldn't really see too many flaws. Also I liked the fact you made a continue part when reading the note. This way the person doesn't have to rush to read.
Overall though effort was shown and turned out fine.
Audio: Was a nice choice and in fact left me whistling it after watching it. Though at times music and talking and sound effects could be low and then all of a sudden loud forcing me to turn down the volume which I don't enjoy doing. Overall needs some improvement with keeping the volume at a decent level and some voice acting need to be a bit more clearer.
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Hmm...all these things have been taken into account. I will be more aware of the flaws and fix the general problems with my future projects.
Thanks for revewing, but your math seems to be a bit off. 3/5 does not equal 8/10, but there's no point in caring about that now.
Although Halloween has past it did seem to successfully spook me just a tad. The music was definitely added to the spookiness of the video. The animation could had been a little better. The pumpkin was drawn well but Frankenstein and the other guy could be better in my opinion but since this is just an intro to your game it doesn't really matter.
Why Can't Newgrounders post flashes that actually have a point to it...horrible and if you actually make a flash this way make sure it isn't just a 10 second thing... >.>
I gave the submission a zero because it didn't work. and a 5/10 because I see your idea and you just need to fix it.
For me, I couldn't get the wepons or the body partsonto the map, they like....went behind it. So just a small bug there you have to take care of lol.
Yeah...Not really fun.
Kinda felt like you were really on NG at times. O.o But overall pretty good.
It did have it's ups and downs. The beat would pick up in speed and then slow down and then so on. To me that's like teasing lol. It would be like being in a car then flooring it to 80 then cutting back to 30. The beats and instruments seemed to blend nicely with each other. The beginning of the sound had a really nice beat which is what led me to continue listening. The music doesn't really seem to start "moving" until a little after a minute and then it gets faster but then like I said gets fast and slow. Overall it's enjoyable.
Thanks, you have some points there! Great review :)
Was good. One thing I think needs improvement though is that for me the person singing was sorta being drowned out by the music. I find that to be really the only thing wrong. Because To try and hear what he was singing about I had to turn the volume up quite a bit but then the instruments would be too loud to keep the volume at that level. As I said it was overall pretty good though and the sound blended quite well with each other.
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