Score: 8

"Overall, Well."

submission: Nintendo Story ep 3

date: November 17, 2008

Graphics: I can't criticize the background because that is a sprite. But Mario definitely did not look natural walking and he could had been drawn a little better. The other characters though were drawn acceptably well. Just the teleporting could use work because the circles just kinda overlap the characters and should sorta blend in more. Once they got fighting though you couldn't really see too many flaws. Also I liked the fact you made a continue part when reading the note. This way the person doesn't have to rush to read.
Overall though effort was shown and turned out fine.

Audio: Was a nice choice and in fact left me whistling it after watching it. Though at times music and talking and sound effects could be low and then all of a sudden loud forcing me to turn down the volume which I don't enjoy doing. Overall needs some improvement with keeping the volume at a decent level and some voice acting need to be a bit more clearer.

3/5-8/10

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Score: 8

"Nicely Done."

submission: Halloween night intro.

date: November 17, 2008

Although Halloween has past it did seem to successfully spook me just a tad. The music was definitely added to the spookiness of the video. The animation could had been a little better. The pumpkin was drawn well but Frankenstein and the other guy could be better in my opinion but since this is just an intro to your game it doesn't really matter.

4/5-8/10

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Score: 5

"Umm...."

submission: Kinda NO GAME

date: April 20, 2008

I gave the submission a zero because it didn't work. and a 5/10 because I see your idea and you just need to fix it.

For me, I couldn't get the wepons or the body partsonto the map, they like....went behind it. So just a small bug there you have to take care of lol.

Score: 10

"Good Job."

submission: Tankmen VS Tankmen 1

date: March 26, 2008

Just need to get rid of those black lines. XDD

Score: 2

"Oh God..."

submission: Sword Fight1

date: February 4, 2008

Why Can't Newgrounders post flashes that actually have a point to it...horrible and if you actually make a flash this way make sure it isn't just a 10 second thing... >.>

Score: 2

"Sigh."

submission: Morph claymation

date: February 4, 2008

A two for effort and a zero for the flash because it had no plot setting was bad and overall not entertaining at all, have a nice life!

Score: 9

"Great!"

submission: SKATER V2 Christmas 2007

date: December 23, 2007

Really good as always...

Score: 1

"Uhh..."

submission: Burger Restaurant

date: November 21, 2007

Yeah...Not really fun.

Score: 8

"Lulz."

submission: Newgrounds SIM v 1.2

date: November 9, 2007

Kinda felt like you were really on NG at times. O.o But overall pretty good.

Score: 2

"Err..."

submission: Horse Rancher

date: November 9, 2007

It was pretty good, but my horse wasn't fast I trained him but his stamina jjst got lower as the months went on...not too great In my opinion.